Bel Canto POLL # 9

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Bel Canto POLL # 9

Postby Gypsy » Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:52 pm

Who says lunch hour is for eating? ;)

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Postby true_noir_chloe » Wed Feb 04, 2004 7:07 pm

>>Who says lunch hour is for eating?

Let me be the first to say... yes. ^_^ LOL

I voted for #3 because Ezekial probably has a serious guilt issue going on, and he wants to amend somehow. So, I said he would obviously be the one who would volunteer to take first watch.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Ashley » Thu Feb 05, 2004 2:27 pm

I voted Tryce because he'd probably love to have the opportunity to come across as the dashing, bold hero for the ladies (and I bet he'd think they were cute while they were asleep too)
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