In Futile

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In Futile

Postby Door Nob » Mon Dec 29, 2003 4:22 pm

In Futile

Why Won’t this In futile brain of mine work
Information comes in one ear and goes out the other

One ear has signs saying
Do not enter.....Wrong way....Caution
The other
Welcome enjoy invading my brain
Good info aloud to enter....only

It doesn’t sink in the middle
My brain, every ones brain for that matter was made to be like a sponge
To collect and to take in things

But mine is defected like a run down car
A run down car that can only go 5 miles an hour

How more pathetic can I get?
What can you call pathetic?
Can anything really be called pathetic?
The definition of pathetic
Is morally based on what you think

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Postby true_noir_chloe » Tue Dec 30, 2003 10:13 pm

My mind also doesn't work quite often. I find if I keep restarting and just chugging away eventually something worthwhile comes out of it. *hehe*

You're new so I'd like to say hi and welcome! ^_^

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Door Nob » Wed Dec 31, 2003 10:10 am

Thank you.
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