GodSent: Christian Fiction

[ChristianKitsune]

this thread will be updated soon...I hope please bear with me! ^^;

[Nami]

*is late* I just read it.. and I was like "I am so stupid, she updated this in Oct." Lol I love it so far, Poor Nathaniel! *pats his back* You really know how to suck someone in! ^^ Good Job!

[ChristianKitsune]

(Again a rather large update, I am excited for this chapter though...it has a lot of meaning in it...I hope you can find it! (HINT it's about Darkness)

Chapter Seven: A Stranger’s Voice

Darcy groaned as she looked at her alarm clock. “12:30! Man, I want to sleep!â€

[ChristianKitsune]

“I… I am not sure.â€

[rocklobster]

Great update, CR! I have a few ideas, if you don't mind.

1. You've already had two of the archangels show up in your story. Why not have Raphael show up soon? He's the archangel of healing. If you want some ideas, see if you can find a Bible with the book of Tobit in it. I know some Bibles don't have it, but I think the New American Standard version might. He also shows up on Touched By an Angel sometimes. If you've ever watched it, he was that Hispanic dude who worked with Monica and Tess on some of the episodes. He was actually my favorite character on the show.
2. Can you introduce a character named Jason next to encourage Darcy to become a good person. (yes, it's a character based on me. Or at least, your impression of me) He can be a student at Darcy's school and be very kind and humorous. You can give him a sense of intuition that tells him whether people are good to know or not. He should be in a special education class (I was in one for most of my school days because I had a bad temper. But you don't need to include that flaw) And yes, he can be a Catholic, since I told you I'm one. If you need any help on how Catholics view Christianity, I'd be glad to help. BTW, normally, special ed kids aren't popular, but have him meet Nathaniel. Jason has a fiery spirit that can be easily noticed.
3. Did you know that in the comic book version of Justice League there was an angel named Zauriel? Maybe you could have him make a cameo. (as in a walk-on. Like have him pass by and have one of Nathaniel's angel friends go "That's Zauriel. He's so cool. He knows Superman." And then have Nathaniel say "But I thought Superman wasn't a real person".)
4. As I said in my PM, please feel free to use Michieru's guardian angel, Murasame. Maybe you can have him show up and give Nathaniel some advice. He can introduce himself as a former guardian of a great Japanese swordsman . In fact, as far as I'm concerned, he can be a regular character. You can add the "el" as a suffix if you want to keep your pattern. Like this: Murasame-el.

[Nami]

I love it CR-chan!! i love it to death! Excellent! You should REad Shelter of Wings my friend! YOu would love it!

[ChristianKitsune]

Great update, CR! I have a few ideas, if you don't mind.

1. You've already had two of the archangels show up in your story. Why not have Raphael show up soon? He's the archangel of healing. If you want some ideas, see if you can find a Bible with the book of Tobit in it. I know some Bibles don't have it, but I think the New American Standard version might. He also shows up on Touched By an Angel sometimes. If you've ever watched it, he was that Hispanic dude who worked with Monica and Tess on some of the episodes. He was actually my favorite character on the show.
2. Can you introduce a character named Jason next to encourage Darcy to become a good person. (yes, it's a character based on me. Or at least, your impression of me) He can be a student at Darcy's school and be very kind and humorous. You can give him a sense of intuition that tells him whether people are good to know or not. He should be in a special education class (I was in one for most of my school days because I had a bad temper. But you don't need to include that flaw) And yes, he can be a Catholic, since I told you I'm one. If you need any help on how Catholics view Christianity, I'd be glad to help. BTW, normally, special ed kids aren't popular, but have him meet Nathaniel. Jason has a fiery spirit that can be easily noticed.
3. Did you know that in the comic book version of Justice League there was an angel named Zauriel? Maybe you could have him make a cameo. (as in a walk-on. Like have him pass by and have one of Nathaniel's angel friends go "That's Zauriel. He's so cool. He knows Superman." And then have Nathaniel say "But I thought Superman wasn't a real person".)
4. As I said in my PM, please feel free to use Michieru's guardian angel, Murasame. Maybe you can have him show up and give Nathaniel some advice. He can introduce himself as a former guardian of a great Japanese swordsman . In fact, as far as I'm concerned, he can be a regular character. You can add the "el" as a suffix if you want to keep your pattern. Like this: Murasame-el.

I will consider these things...However, I already have an idea on how the series will end and how it will run..^^; The Archangels will be back! I can promise you that! ^_^!

I will probably not be using any characters that are not my own for the time being...There could be some copy right issues there...^^; I don't wanna sued before I am even published.

Jason sounds a lot like Nathaniel...so I am not sure if I will be able to grant this request... If I can though, maybe he can be a part of the Christian group.

For now my story isn't going to have a certain demonination in it.

Thanks for all the feedback everyone! I write this for you guys after all! Please pray for this story! I really want to find a way to convert it to manga form soon!

[Destroyer2000]

Good update. I have one question, though...the book of Tobit? Where did that come from? I've never even heard of it...it is a true part of the Bible, or something someone added in, like the Mormon book?

[ChristianKitsune]

I wouldn't know that, Destroyer2000....^^;

[rocklobster]

That's ok. And I'm honored that you think I'm like Nathaniel I just feel that Darcy needs someone who's gone through a "miniature hell" (think Job in the Bible) in order to inspire her to keep her chin up. Not only that, but Nathaniel needs someone who can help him "fit in" who's not as popular. So having a special ed kid would probably help with that. This way, he can stay away from the popular types and perhaps seem more genuine.
BTW, about the Zauriel idea. I'm sorry, it was a silly idea. But there might be a way around it. You could have someone holding a comic book with the character on it and maybe have Nathaniel be surprised that people mistake angels for superheroes. It'd be quite the interesting point to ponder.
And it's a good idea to keep your story as non-denominational as possible. Especially when you consider how different sects can view Christianity.

[Peregrine]

I've just finished reading your story. It's great! I am really looking forward to the next update. Keep it up!

[ChristianKitsune]

aww thanks so much, Peregrine!!

I plan to update this story soon.. i am sorry for the wait everyone! I haven't forgotten..but school has got me bogged down...I seriously feel as though I am going to suffocate. XD