sad poems.......... dont read it if u dont wanna cry

[fairyprincess90]

this ones not really sad.... but i felt like posting it anyways

Words Written

Under my tree,
In late afternoon,
Butterflies floating around me,
Flowers nodding,
In the wind,

My soul,
Feels relieved,
I can finally breathe,
Fresh air,
Sweeps over me,

Writing in my journal,
I feel so free,
Words written down,
Express what’s inside of me,
A burden lifted,
I write my poetry,
I get lost,
Inside of me.

[fairyprincess90]

I AM THE ONE

i am the lonely one,
i am the one that sits in the shadows,
i am the one that enjoys this misery,
i am the one that smiles in my pain,
i am the one noone cares about,
because i dont care about them.

[Zilch]

These all sound exactly like stuff I used to write. Good talent, but don't dwell on the crap in your life. Take it from someone that's been there.

[fairyprincess90]

I WILL ACCEPT AND EMBRACE

From now on,
i wont try and change any more
never again,
will i find myself bleeding on the floor,
i will embrace what i am,
i cant change what i feel,
i will accept who i am,
i will be real,
people call me strange,
its what i am,
they say they dont understand,
its true, they never can,
i am different,
its a gift i have,
as i sit in the darkness,
i am glad.

[creed4]

good though a little sad

[martinloyola]

more like defiant and determined to stick to your guns
a little gusto

[XxjesusfreakxX]

i love them beth. and he is a butt.

alot of poems i write i write when im sad... v_v but it helps to get my feelings out... i wanna know if any of them touch you... i know it helps me to read about other peoples struggles because then i feel like im not alone...

these two are for a good friend i had who really hurt me... v_v

~MY PAIN~

Walking slow,
My hand running along the fence beside me,
No one could ever know,
The things I feel and the things I see,

My eyes stare ahead,
My fingers go numb as they glide over the wire,
All these thoughts running through my head,
My heart burns as if on fire<

I wish all of me would go numb,
So that I would not feel this pain,
You make me feel stupid and dumb,
You treat my love for you as if it were a game,

You were a brother to me,
To you I opened my heart,
Can't you see,
How you tore my life apart,

Rain falls from the sky,
Tears fall from my eyes,
I kiss the memories good-bye,
I cry,

But I must go on,
Down life’s lonely road,
With you I’m done,
and on with life I go.


this one is axcually a song... not a poem... i write songs too.

For The One Who Is No More

I have two words for you,
Its over,
I tried to be a friend to you,
But I’m through,
You broke my heart into,
A million pieces,
I’ve had enough of this,
Enough of you,

You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,

I have two words for you,
Its over,
I did what I wanted to,
And now we’re no more,
I tried to be your to be your friend,
But you didn’t want me,
And It’s a shame things can’t be the same,
As they were before,

You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,

It’s sad that you had to loose so many friends,
And it’s sad this had to be the end,
It’s sad that you had to loose me as a friend,
And it’s sad this had to end.

[Anna Mae]

Smashing Mirrors That Show Me My Imperfections

I think that this poem would be more disturbing if it was entitled, "Pretty."
Did you actually do that?
Try using Jesus as your mirror...

Epitaph

I thought that the poem was really cool. The only drawback is the last line. That gives it a different feel.

[fairyprincess90]

Smashing Mirrors That Show Me My Imperfections

I think that this poem would be more disturbing if it was entitled, "Pretty."
Did you actually do that?
Try using Jesus as your mirror...

Epitaph

I thought that the poem was really cool. The only drawback is the last line. That gives it a different feel.

Smashing Mirrors That Show Me My Imperfections .... yeah it would porbably be better with a better name... and i wrote that at a time when i felt really ugly... i always feel very insecure about myself..

[Tigerchu]

Just wanted to say it's a good thing to spill your feelings into writing or art forms. It gets it out. Plus it can be productive.

[fairyprincess90]

here are two poems... i like them! the both go together... the one is sad and the one is happier! ^_^ i wrote these today and ... i really like them! i hope you like them too!
there might be some typos ... sorry.

This Winter in My Heart

the leaves are falling,
my heart is breaking,
the sun is fading away,

the temperature is dropping,
my heart is growing cold,
there are longer nights and shorter days,

i walk down the lonely road,
and those naked trees,
make a tunnel around me,

my hearts cries for warmth,
a shiver creeps down my spine,
the ground is frozen below me,

the tears freeze on my cheeks,
my happiness hibernates,
the sky turns grey above me,

this winter in my hearts,
this darkness in my soul,
i just want you to love me.



Make It Spring In My Life Again

i look into your eyes,
my frozen heart melts,
i feel a warmth like never before,

the sun is rising,
these icicles are melting away,
there will be winter no more,

i see the flowers blooming,
the butterflies awake,
the trees begin to grow green,

color floods the sky,
my soul cries out with joy,
at the beautiful, wonderful scene,

my happiness awakes,
as the sun peaks through the cracks,
i can hardly remember when,

i shivered in the cold,
and cried into the night,
because you make it spring in my heart again.

[Anna Mae]

This Winter in My Heart

the leaves are falling,
my heart is breaking,
the sun is fading away,

the temperature is dropping,
my heart is growing cold,
there are longer nights and shorter days, I like the rhythm and rhyme scheme you have going here.

i walk down the lonely road,
and those naked trees,
make a tunnel around me,

my hearts cries for warmth,
a shiver creeps down my spine,
the ground is frozen below me,

the tears freeze on my cheeks,
my happiness hibernates,
the sky turns grey above me,

this winter in my hearts, More than one heart?
this darkness in my soul,
i just want you to love me. I would suggest omitting the commas instead of ending each line with them.



Make It Spring In My Life Again

i look into your eyes,
my frozen heart melts,
i feel a warmth like never before,

the sun is rising,
these icicles are melting away,
there will be winter no more, Hurrah for love poems.

i see the flowers blooming,
the butterflies awake,
the trees begin to grow green,

color floods the sky,
my soul cries out with joy,
at the beautiful, I really appreciate that comma. wonderful scene,

my happiness awakes,
as the sun peaks through the cracks,
i can hardly remember when,

i shivered in the cold,
and cried into the night,
because you make it spring in my heart again.

Nice. I like the sequence you have between the two poems. Are you going to write poems for the other two seasons? That would be kind of cool.

[fairyprincess90]

this winter in my hearts, More than one heart?

oppps that was a typo... ^_^

hmm... that would be neat to make love poems for the other two seasons...
hmmm.

[creed4]

Good stuff

[fairyprincess90]

this one is about someone... he's a singer in a band... and it makes me sad that he's not saved... all the pictures of him that i see... he always looks so sad... V.V
so this is to him.

Davey

vs1
you're so hurt,
you're so in pain,
you say you're comforted,
by the rain,
but i know that,
you hate being what you are,
you feel like hope,
is too far,

vs2
you need love,
but you never get it,
you've been hurt,
and you'll never forget it,
you're so sad,
and you're so broken,
words of sadness and hate,
are what you've spoken,

(chorus)
and i want you to know,
i love you,
i care, i feel for you,
and i want you to know,
i'm praying for you,
i hope you'll soon know the truth

vs 3
you sing,
about your depression,
act as if its the only thing,
but there's another suggestion,
you can turn it around,
and make beauty from pain,
trust in jesus,
he'll stop the rain,

brdge
there's someone who loves you,
someone besides me,
and he wants to,
set you free,
satan has youm
in his clasp,
but reach out to God,
and you'll be free at last.

[fairyprincess90]

this one i wrote when i was mad... because i know i struggle... just read my prayer requests... but i hate it when i try to be better... and once i fall people condemn me as if i'm actually satan or something!
it frustrates me so bad!

I'm Different Now, Dont You Agree

you look at me that way,
and i feel faint because of what you saym
you condemn me for what i've done,
as if you've never done anything wrong,
you say i'm messed up and that i have issues,
but dont you realize you also have something wrong with you,
i feel like breaking down and crying,
i know i'm not perfect, but i'm trying.

(chorus)
you say the sin always remains,
that my heart could never change,
that the sinner is always the same,
but i'm going to change that today,
i'm not perfect but i try to refrain,
from tempations that call my name,
i know God will care for me just the same,
His love for me will always remain,

I'm doing better dont you agree,
resisting the demons that torment me,
i know i fall but i get back up,
i might spill water, but i dont drop the cup,
i havent cried myself to sleep,
because i know that God forgave me,
you might still think i'm the same,
but inside i know that i've changed.

[fairyprincess90]

comments and ridicule are appreciated! ^_^

tell me what you think! ^_^

[creed4]

They are good, Why would I want to ridicle

I'm different now is very good. Keep up the good work

[fairyprincess90]

thanks! i like that one too!
^_^

[fairyprincess90]

I Don’t Understand You


You make no sense,
You make me mad,
I feel hurt, broken,
I feel sad,

You told me,
That I meant something to you,
But now I see,
That that’s not true,

I’m tired of being hurt,
I’m tired of your lies,
I wont take this anymore,
I’m saying goodbye.

[Anna Mae]

In Davey I especially liked the lines, "you say you're comforted, / by the rain."

In I'm Different Now, Don't You Agree I thought that the last two lines of the first stanza were particularly effective. That is probably largely do to the hints of rhyme that suddenly slide into a full-blown, pleasing couplet. I also took special note of the lines, "i know i fall but i get back up, / i might spill water, but i dont drop the cup." Once again I found the rhyming pleasing, but I also liked the imagery you used with the water.

I appreciate your sentiment in "I Don’t Understand You."

[fairyprincess90]

Consumed

the cold breeze slices through me,
as i stand there all alone,
looking up at the dark sky,
i stare at the stars and wish for comfort,
loneliness consumes me,
i just want to let go,
please relieve me of this burden,
i just want to be happy with who i am,
i dont understand,
why do i feel this way,
someone help me,
i will come out of this, somday.




Dreaming

slowing drifting off,
slipping into bliss,
baby-blue eyes, closing,
breath escaping my lips,
colors dance under shut eye lids,
floating away into my dreams,
sleeping peacefully,
time stops, so it seems,
angels softly singing,
music plays sweet lullabies,
i fly to a secret world,
slumbering under sleepy skies,
refreshing, relaxing,
my burdens fall away,
embracing this feeling,
i wish would forever stay,
plase do not wake me,
for only in my dreams am i free.

[Anna Mae]

Consumed

the cold breeze slices through me,
as i stand there all alone, [Your out-of-body perspective is interesting (in a good way).]
looking up at the dark sky, [Unless you're big on the idea of the entire poem being one sentence, I would place a period here.]
i stare at the stars and wish for comfort, [And perhaps a semicolon here.]
loneliness consumes me, [Another period.]
i just want to let go, [And another. Or, if you feel that all of those periods make the poem too choppy, you could simply use no punctuation at the end of a line to denote the change. That might be the best option as it would retain the one sentence feel while avoiding the sense of a run-on.]
please relieve me of this burden,
i just want to be happy with who i am, [So the burden is having to change?]
i don't understand,
why do i feel this way, [I would omit "do".]
someone help me,
i will come out of this, somday. [On your own, or with the aid of the requested help?]
[I like the feeling you give of being in a universe so obviously filled, and yet being alone.]




Dreaming

slowing drifting off,
slipping into bliss,
baby-blue eyes, closing,
breath escaping my lips,
colors dance under shut eye lids, ["closed" would feel more poetic than "shut"]
floating away into my dreams, [For this poem, I would omit all of the punctuation at the end of lines. That would give it a more dreamy quality.]
sleeping peacefully,
time stops, so it seems, [Is the brief switch from "ing" to "s" intentional?]
angels softly singing,
music plays sweet lullabies, [I would leave the "time stops, so it seems" line as it is, but switch this one to "ing"...]
i fly to a secret world, [...unless that line is intended as a segue into this one. Is there a particular pattern or significance to the lines that break out of the "ing" form? That could be a subtle, effective tool.]
slumbering under sleepy skies,
refreshing, relaxing,
my burdens fall away,
embracing this feeling,
i wish would forever stay,
plase do not wake me,
for only in my dreams am i free. [Nice idea.]

[Shuji]

I dont feel like crying. good poems though.

[faithfighter]

wow! fairyprincess90 the winter and spring poems are beautiful!!!!!!
you really did a great job here, keep up the great work!

[Kuro-Mizu]

alot of poems i write i write when im sad... v_v but it helps to get my feelings out... i wanna know if any of them touch you... i know it helps me to read about other peoples struggles because then i feel like im not alone...

these two are for a good friend i had who really hurt me... v_v

~MY PAIN~

Walking slow,
My hand running along the fence beside me,
No one could ever know,
The things I feel and the things I see,

My eyes stare ahead,
My fingers go numb as they glide over the wire,
All these thoughts running through my head,
My heart burns as if on fire<

I wish all of me would go numb,
So that I would not feel this pain,
You make me feel stupid and dumb,
You treat my love for you as if it were a game,

You were a brother to me,
To you I opened my heart,
Can't you see,
How you tore my life apart,

Rain falls from the sky,
Tears fall from my eyes,
I kiss the memories good-bye,
I cry,

But I must go on,
Down life’s lonely road,
With you I’m done,
and on with life I go.


this one is axcually a song... not a poem... i write songs too.

For The One Who Is No More

I have two words for you,
Its over,
I tried to be a friend to you,
But I’m through,
You broke my heart into,
A million pieces,
I’ve had enough of this,
Enough of you,

You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,

I have two words for you,
Its over,
I did what I wanted to,
And now we’re no more,
I tried to be your to be your friend,
But you didn’t want me,
And It’s a shame things can’t be the same,
As they were before,

You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,

It’s sad that you had to loose so many friends,
And it’s sad this had to be the end,
It’s sad that you had to loose me as a friend,
And it’s sad this had to end.

Those are amazing.... I want to write music for the song heh...

[fairyprincess90]

heres a few more





I REFUSE

You try to kill me,
You try to snuff my flame,
I refuse to let you win,
I will not let you blacken my name,
I will not give in to your temptation,
Though I admit how cunning you are,
But I will not let you ruin me,
With you, I DECLARE WAR!
Listen to me, you snake,
You deceitful fallen angel,
You fake,
Listen, you, the Prince of Evil,
I refuse to let you take me captive,
I refuse, I refuse,
You have beaten my before,
But no longer will I be used,
Yes, it is true,
Oh how powerful you are,
But my God is stronger than you,
And with Him by my side, with you I DECLARE WAR!




I Never Saw Someone Die (Until Today)

I never saw someone die,
Until today,
Why did it have to be you?
Why did it happen this way?

I didn’t know how to help,
I didn’t know what to do,
I just stood and watched,
Praying that you’d live,
As people rushed around,
I watched your pale lips,
Hoping I’d see you begin to breathe again,
But nothing happened,
There was nothing I could do,
I stood there helpless,
Watching you die,
I never got to say good-bye,

I’ve never seen someone die,
Not until today,
But why did it have to be you?
Why did it have to be this way?

So suddenly it happened,
You left so quickly,
I wasn’t prepared,
I wasn’t ready to let you go,
Why did God take you so soon?
Couldn’t He have given me just a little more time?
I needed time to tell you I loved you,
But I never got to,
I just watched helplessly,
I watched you die,
I’ll never forget,
And I’ll never understand why.



Even Though I Don’t Cry

We buried her today,
The air wet and skies grey,
The minister preached,
I heard the sobs all around me,
I did not cry,
I did not weep,
People don’t think I’m hurting,
But I’m hurting more than anyone,
I hold everything inside,
Just because you don’t see it doesn’t mean it’s not there,
I’m hurt and I’m angry,
Because life’s not fair,
I loved her,
She meant so much to me,
But I refuse to cry,
It’s just my personality,
I AM hurting,
My heart aches like no one knows,
I just don’t show it with tears,
I express my pain in other ways,
Not by crying,
But by poetry and writing,
I love her and I miss her,
Even though I don’t cry.




I WANT TO BE ALIVE

Why do I feel this way?
I’m so tired of being unhappy,
Nothing ever pleases me,
I am always so sad,
I go on living,
Just living, and nothing else,
But I don’t want to be that way,
I want to make a change.

I don’t just want to live,
I want to be alive,
I’m tired of going through the motions,
Just to get by,
I want to be alive,
I want to feel alive.

Today is done,
Tomorrow is just another day,
I get through one week,
And I’m met with the next,
I want to make something of life,
I want to live on the edge,
I want to live my life,
Live like I might die in a second.

I don’t just want to live,
I want to be alive,
I’m tired of going through the motions,
Just to get by,
I want to be alive,
I want to feel alive.

[Phantom_Sorano]

Wow...how very powerful and moving....I love your work!

[Anna Mae]

'I Never Saw Someone Die (Until Today)' is a great title. I also liked the last two lines of that one.

"Even Though I Don't Cry" had some nice elements. The assonance did a nice job of conveying your feeling.