(Concept) ... Of Guardians, Eden, and The Creator: The Story Staress

[Infinitis]

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** This story is very old and still in progress. I am currently working on the First story: Staress. If you are thinking of leaving this thread, please give it a second thought. I would like to have MANY critiques of any kind. Since I am aiming to have this be professionally done (published or not), DO NOT BE SOFT. Also, having brothers and sisters in Christ to help and support many stories on this site gives me great inspiration. I look forward to your thoughts!

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Thank you for reading!


Now~


Mission:
My audience is toward the ages between Middle School and Beginning College. In the world of Manga (mainly American), I see a lot of dark stories dealing with vampires and stories that are deep in the macabre. These genres are nice... but only in moderation. I think there should be more lighter (I'm not meaning fluffy and unrealistic) , uplifting stories to learn and laugh from.

Staress is my child from that thought...

Also~ To spead the gooden newzen~ (yah.) Goths need Jesus too. ;_; (I'm mainly Sweet Loli though~ hehe)

(tbc... I'm at school and will finish this at home. Comment anyways if you like!)

[Esoteric]

Perhaps I'm missing something, but where is the story? I can't seem to find a link.

[Infinitis]

Perhaps I'm missing something, but where is the story? I can't seem to find a link.

haha! Sorry~ I wasn't quite finished with my thoughts yet (I was carried away by life and Japanese Lessons. o_0 )

[Infinitis]

Alright!! And For the Continuation!!~ (--/////0/////--)

I showed you my Mission and Goal, now most importantly...

Theme:

Hope can be a guiding light. But how can we let hope guide us when it doesn't recognise the sadness and the tyrrany of humanity. It is when we place our hope on an unwavering faith do we begin to trust...and love.

Setting

Edonia
A world created from earthen debris that surrounded the Garden of Eden as The Creator too out the garden from Earth. Now, the lands float above the Garden. There is a legend in Edonia, that within the Core grows a Tree of Life. Kings have coveted this Tree for its immortality, but many have failed to set foot inside sacred ground...

...that is until...

Plot

The Deviant Ackrim plans to capture the Tree of Life for his own and Edonia is in the way. He discovers the only way to enter the Core is the destruction of Edonia. He sees an oppertunity in a girl, who ironically, holds the Star of Hope... He knows more than anyone that to mess with hope, you get destruction. Ackrim then goes out of his way to make her life worthless, but with difficulty. Yet, the prevention of hopelessness causes the girl's demise.

People try to hide the bad from Infinitis, thinking she would lose hope in the good with life~ This makes her naive.
Because she misses out on the bad times, she doesn't understand how to grow up~ Thus, making her ignorant and almost half-hearted.
Lastly, when the bad times are kept silent, they are hidden in Infinitis' bubbly smile. When the day comes when she has to face her past, will she still have the strenth to believe in anything anymore?

It is dangerous to be a Light, because you can lose that light so easily on your own. Infinitis, as being the most 'hopefullest' is the 'happiest' in the world... When the Happiest girl in the world gives into the sadness, the world falls with her... So then Ackrim's plan will succeed! ...

... that is until ...

a man named Eeen comes into her life.

(This is the Plot, a VERY generalized statement on Staress. I will have the actual Storyline and Characters up when I can feel less sleepy~ ^_^;; It's late now.)

Thank you for reading!! Please comment and question me~! I'll try to update this as soon as I can.