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Poetry and Stories

PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 6:56 am
by Monkey Princess
Love Is...
Looking in his eyes and instantly having your heart melt.
It's seeing his smile on a bad day and instantly perking up.
It's hearing him laugh and wanting to laugh yourself
Love Is...
The first time he says your name,
Those first little steps,
The first time those little lips say his first dirty word,
Because let's face it, even though it's wrong,
You can't help but giggle and bring him into a tight hug,
When you see that expression on his adorable little face.
Ultimatly, love can be discribed in two words:
Aiden Gray

PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:06 am
by Esoteric
This is very nicely written. Simple and sweet, but effective. I like it!

PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 2:44 pm
by Monkey Princess
Thank you.

PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 5:16 pm
by 12praiseGOD
hehe...i love who you dedicated it too...sounds more boyfriend-like though...love it!

PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:42 pm
by Sae-chan
Aww. Like esoteric said, it's a simple but sweet poem. I like it a lot, and I'll be looking forward to more! :)

PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:12 am
by Monkey Princess
12PraiseGod- I wrote it while I was waiting in the hospital. Does it really? Huh. Oh well.

Sae-chan- Thank you. I'll try to post more. This one's my favorite though.

PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:34 pm
by Monkey Princess
So here's the next poem it's called tomorrow. Tell me whatcha think!

[color="Plum"]I'll see your smile...after tomorrow
You'll see mine.
I'll get to hug you...after tomorrow
Will you want to hug me?
I'll become yours...after tomorrow
That is if you want me to.
I'll never leave you...after tomorrow
Do you want me to stay with you?
It seems like our whole world depends on the words...after tomorrow.

What if tomorrow never comes?
Where does that leave us?
It leaves me with the thought of you in my mind for the rest of eternity.
The question is...will i be in yours?[/color]