Hopeful Dreams - my attempt at poetry
PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:47 pm
This is actually the second poem I have written of my own will. I'm not a poet by any means, but I would like to know how it is, and how I can improve on it:
Hopeful Dreams
Hopeful, wishful dreams
Rise to the cloudless skies
Like burning stars
As a man’s heart flies!
The celebrated beauty
Held by a gentle innocence
Resonates like a beacon
By her sudden appearance!
As their hands clasp
And the pair take a stance
Love takes a tangible form
As the two dance!
The lights fade
The music plays
Couples swing
And hearts are ablaze
The night wears on
The symphony goes on
With the hope of a love
For the eternal dawn!
And yes, this was written with someone special in mind.
Hopeful Dreams
Hopeful, wishful dreams
Rise to the cloudless skies
Like burning stars
As a man’s heart flies!
The celebrated beauty
Held by a gentle innocence
Resonates like a beacon
By her sudden appearance!
As their hands clasp
And the pair take a stance
Love takes a tangible form
As the two dance!
The lights fade
The music plays
Couples swing
And hearts are ablaze
The night wears on
The symphony goes on
With the hope of a love
For the eternal dawn!
And yes, this was written with someone special in mind.