This is actually the second poem I have written of my own will. I'm not a poet by any means, but I would like to know how it is, and how I can improve on it:
Hopeful Dreams
Hopeful, wishful dreams
Rise to the cloudless skies
Like burning stars
As a man’s heart flies!
The celebrated beauty
Held by a gentle innocence
Resonates like a beacon
By her sudden appearance!
As their hands clasp
And the pair take a stance
Love takes a tangible form
As the two dance!
The lights fade
The music plays
Couples swing
And hearts are ablaze
The night wears on
The symphony goes on
With the hope of a love
For the eternal dawn!
And yes, this was written with someone special in mind.
Hopeful Dreams - my attempt at poetry
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[color="Red"]Distance is to Love as Wind is to Fire...it extinguishes the small, and ignites the great. - Unknown[/color]
[color="RoyalBlue"]“Falling in love with someone isn't always going to be easy... Anger... tears... laughter.. It's when you want to be together despite it all. That's when you truly love another. I'm sure of it.â€
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[color="Red"]Distance is to Love as Wind is to Fire...it extinguishes the small, and ignites the great. - Unknown[/color]
[color="RoyalBlue"]“Falling in love with someone isn't always going to be easy... Anger... tears... laughter.. It's when you want to be together despite it all. That's when you truly love another. I'm sure of it.â€
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