Poem Game

[Madefromclay]

Hey Guys, How is everyone doing today?
This is a little game. I'm going to start off with 8 lines and the test for you is to see if you can extend it. remember make the lines you add rime (no more than 2-8) and try to stay on the subject... Okay?
O- and try to give it another color too...

I knocked but you didn't answer,
I called and you refused to come,
I was anxious for you to meet me,
but instead you rejected my Son...
You looked for love in all the wrong places,
got a false sense of security,
I wanted to give you forever love and healing,
but because you rejected, hell is your eternity...

[Ratrace]

not to good, but it will do

Yet I will come back again,
And stand outside your door
For I want you to be my child,
Not burn forever more.

[Madefromclay]

That was pretty good Ratrace.

When will you let me in?
you're bleeding inside,
I desire to heal your heart
and walk close to your side

[Photosoph]

For I'm a true friend
Who will always be there;
Never will I leave you;
Be convinced, for I care.