--Always Extremes--

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--Always Extremes--

Postby Chosen » Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:38 pm

--Always Extremes--

With me its always been extremes,
Solid white,
Ever black,
I ran so far, to darkest dell
Doing my worst, on the way to hell
I thought I couldn't go deeper,
And then I fell...

Hopeless scream,
I cry aloud,
Shattered dream,
Bent and bowed.

A false hope offered,
A spark of light?
A trip of death.
Again I fight,
Another trip,
Into darkest night.

The journey longer,
My heart still broken.
A chance to be saved?
I think not.

A beam of light,
A new hope found,
His name is...
Jesus?
I cry aloud!
"Son of God!
I broken lie!
Make me new!
I want not to die!"

He Heard my cry!
A hope to bring,
Healing Salve,
To a torchered wing.
A Salvaged Heart,
Now has a home.
The Son of God,
Calls Me his own.

October 6th 2007 ~Chosen~
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Postby GeneD » Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:34 am

Wow, this is really powerful. It gave me chills. :) Well done, it's really good Chosen, I love it.
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