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Postby Dark_angel » Tue May 25, 2004 9:56 pm

:angel: I think this one matches my name, but I'm not sure cause I just doodled this in a short time without thinking...^_^ :hits_self

and YES she is wearing something, just so you know.
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Postby Ren_sama » Tue May 25, 2004 10:06 pm

WOW..thats really nice~!!!! O.O
oooo and you can do nice hands too~!!! o_o
and this is jus a doodle!? O__< *twitch* WwooowW...
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Postby Dark_angel » Tue May 25, 2004 11:05 pm

[quote="anonymous"]...
... are you sure she's wearing something? sure doesnt look like it.......
and since you're a special friend of mine irl, i'll actually critique it ^-^ *cracks knuckles* :evil:
the wing structure is bad. you should know that. unless the wings are totally broken at the base, they should not droop that low. also the feathers should be divided into sections with an appearance suitable to their functions and not just look like long fluffy things sticking off of the wing frame. the girl herself looks anorexic, but since anime and manga tend to do that to further extremes than you anyways, i'll overlook that. here eyebrows look a bit long and they seem to go off her face. also might be a tiny bit high, or is that caused by the fact that they are too long.. arms might actually be a tiny bit long(elbow does not reach that far down to the waist..) and the hair would be far to long for her to let it droop around her like that. it would get annoying. also i think the hairline would start lower than that]

:wow!: How did I know it was going to be long? -_- :eyebrow:
Oh yeah, you're the one who's critiquing it.... :forehead:

for the third time, she is wearing Something! You should be able to tell, I think.. :sweat:
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Postby Ren_sama » Tue May 25, 2004 11:41 pm

LoL~
Well, either way,i still love it~ XD
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Postby Aka-chan » Wed May 26, 2004 12:04 am

It really is nice! I'm not worried so much about it being realistic; the stylization is great, especially in how you use soft, flowing lines to form the picture. I guess I'm not as picky as anonymous, but I think it's great!

(anonymous, how come you don't critique mine so much?)
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Postby Elric_kun » Wed May 26, 2004 3:04 am

thats really good!!^^ i really like the hair and wings^^
anonymous wrote:and since you're a special friend of mine irl

ooo, a friend of anonymous'!! hiya! XD lol
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Postby Angelchick » Wed May 26, 2004 9:34 pm

nice drawing.
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Postby JediSonic » Fri May 28, 2004 7:31 pm

Beautiful!

Anonymous, who ever said a drawing was incorrect because the subject doesnt mind having long hair? :lol:
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Postby EireWolf » Sat May 29, 2004 11:06 pm

Beautiful drawing. I like how it flows.

I don't think it's meant to be realistic...

I like it. :)
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Postby The_Marauding_Maniac » Sun May 30, 2004 4:26 am

Great job on it! ^.~
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Postby Dark_angel » Mon May 31, 2004 11:28 pm

I will, I will! well, as soon as I can get it in the computer....
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Postby HikariChan » Wed Aug 04, 2004 2:20 am

Thats very nice!!! i like the hair alot!

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